I admit I was scratching
for topics when I came up with this one. But I am fascinated by that state
between waking and sleeping when words let go of my mind and images take over.
So I tried writing into that. The poem (the next-to-last-poem) can be found at Tupelo,
of course. (You've figured that out by now.)
Between Sleeping and Waking
A picture rises, each
line distinct—a jar of purple fruit,
pale
flesh pressed to glass, shadows a midnight blue. Then green
shade moving, an August
field I passed on Gardener Hill
and when that image
stutters, I’m in a stable, watching
a horse lift her head, turn
it away. In a story I don’t recognize
on some
high afternoon, at the heart of a rural summer. All around me
the rustle of animals. I am
looking into a broad shaft of and sunlight floating in the
yellow air—sparks of dust.
Titles drive me crazy.
First this one was just, “Falling Asleep”, then “Dream Starter” which ended up
sounding too “cute” and now it’s “Between Sleeping and Waking” which feels
ham-handed. There’s a word for this stage of sleep: hypnogogia. But who’s going to read
a poem titled “Hypnogogia”? Anyone out there got a
suggestion? I’d be grateful.
I immediately thought of some of the titles and word trios that Robert Okaji has been dealing with this month. I'm glad your friends and families aren't so extreme!
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