My brother Rob sent me this
picture taken we-won't-mention how long ago. It was an odd feeling looking into
the eyes of that young woman, barely married herself at the time. So I wrote
this poem to her. It's called "To a Girl at Her Brother's Wedding"
and I used "girl" with malice aforethought. I've posted an excerpt
here, and the rest will be going up at Tupelo later
today.
From this end of time, I
can tell you that you’re prettier
than you know in your
flowered dress, and that probably
everyone sees how hard
you’re trying. The careful
smile is giving you away.
You can’t know
that the couple at your
table will divorce, or that you never will.
I decided to write a modern
Shakespearean sonnet, first, because one of the fine writers in my 30/30 cohort—Catherine
Abbey Hodges—wrote one right at the beginning, and it blew my socks off. And
then, this is kind of a love poem and what could be more appropriate, right?
But mostly, I just liked the idea of the longer lines, the three stanzas going
in one direction and then the turn just there at the end for the last two
lines. That felt right for the long look back and then the wish for one more glimpse.
The days are dwindling, I
hope the poems aren't going to. If you've always wanted a poem of your very own….
Or if you've always just wanted to give me an order, here's your chance.
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