Joan Blessing offered me this photo of her granddaughter, Lydia, tasting the breeze on a family trip to Hawaii. Joan offered another prompt possibility at the same time, but I fell in love with Lydia and decided to write her an ode--because odes have no downturn, no dark underbelly and for Lydia I wanted a poem all celebration. The right fit, I think, for a little girl who's clearly mastered the art of enjoying the world. The whole poem's on the Tupelo web site here. But this is the way it starts:
Ode to Lydia, Who I’ve Never Actually Met
You who know
the art of celebration
and have
probably just announced
to everyone on
Kamehameha Highway: This
is the best
day ever. You're the girl
who
hugs each gift,
and says,
voice aching with gratitude,
I needed this. Outside the window,
Hawaii flies
past and
your
childhood too, but
you’re a
girl with a gift for tasting
the colors of a brilliant day.
I used to have a kind of bias against odes. Something about being afraid to sound too much as if I were cheer leading or maybe it was discomfort with the second person. All those chirpy you's. Then in the spring I read Neruda and decided I was obviously missing the point. I've got a long way to go before I reach any territory contiguous with Neruda, but I'm willing now to start the trip.
Thank you to everyone who's supporting me and offering ideas. I am so grateful to you all. I still have 20 days to go, though. So like the greedy cuss I am, I'm asking for more. My donor page can be found here. (In other words it hasn't moved.) You can leave me a prompt here on the blog, on the donor page itself in the note they ask you to write, or at my email address.
Chirpy you's can be fun! ;)
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